Friday, June 14, 2019

Gathering Place Comments

Rating: 5.0

All animals need
Water to sustain life.

They gather together
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Darwin Henry Beuning
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Smoky Hoss 08 November 2022

My dad and I always watched Mutual of Omaha's Wild Kingdom with Marlin Perkins! You've brought back some great memories... thank you. And, you've created within me a new vision of the 'animal' world we all live in!

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Kim Barney 22 June 2019

Hank, what a clever idea, to equate the bars of humans to watering holes of the wild beasts! This gets a ten for the idea alone!

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Darwin Henry Beuning 10 August 2019

Kim, Sorry for the late response! ! In my younger years I spent plenty of times in those watering holes. I am lucky to have survived.

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Gail Holt 20 June 2019

Excellent poem. Bars can be a risky place because many patrons drink to excess and will become angry or depressed. Bartenders often do not limit the number of drinks that can be ordered..My main concern is that many of these people decide to drive. Ma auto accidents are due to drunken drivers.

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Gail, it is grand to have comments from my oldest sister. A second Mother to us all growing up. Helping mother with all the chores, cooking, washing cloths, making home made bread. Thank you, Gail! ! ! Perhaps the reader will like my poem titled " Gail's Song" .. At the bottom of the poem are two pictures of Gail and I, when very young.

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Darwin Henry Beuning

Darwin Henry Beuning

Melrose, Minnesota
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