Tongue to vanish earnings
Eye to store memory
Money to craft demand
Friend to spend emotion
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Highly philosophical. So true too. Beautifully crafted. Wonderful style.
''Livings to fertilize soil Love to enter sorrow Life to find the zero'' You say that life is for the matter and spirit is eternal and the spirit is sad when the body dies, because of love.Love is eternal and the spirits are together, after death. The separation of spirits who love each other are causing sorrow and pain .wonderful poem 10++
Love to enter sorrow... Life to find the zero... so true...10
amazing depth..everything is a atrap is it...well written...10
Again so few words are used to express the ultimate truth...Kudos...10++ for the thought expressed...Brishti Mazumdar
We must seize the moment, for no moment is ever repeated. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra
Your poem is the clock of life ticking away to zero, interesting and thoughtful poem regards
Life to find the zero Gateway is calling us Let us go to the zero cogito sum ergo
Yes, clever and covert but full of meaning to be interpreted by the reader. H
I find this a clever and philosophical poem too. We are all here to find and share love with others. 10 Karin Anderson
I quote from my poem - 'Zero Sum': - 'One plus one is zero too, - If you are no one to me, and I am no one to you! ' For your poem 10! -Raj Nandy
extreemly nice, extreemly philosophical. suggeastion, the word zero needs no 'the' before it.10shan
a well craft short poem...I like it. Thanks too, for the drop...Stay safe!
Great one as always sir..your verses are short, but those words speaks a lot, nice one 10++
mystifying totally mystifying...Alf