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mystifying totally mystifying...Alf

Highly philosophical. So true too. Beautifully crafted. Wonderful style.

''Livings to fertilize soil Love to enter sorrow Life to find the zero'' You say that life is for the matter and spirit is eternal and the spirit is sad when the body dies, because of love.Love is eternal and the spirits are together, after death. The separation of spirits who love each other are causing sorrow and pain .wonderful poem 10++

something to ponder about............

Love to enter sorrow... Life to find the zero... so true...10

thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

good philosophical expression of life span

amazing depth..everything is a atrap is it...well written...10

Again so few words are used to express the ultimate truth...Kudos...10++ for the thought expressed...Brishti Mazumdar

We must seize the moment, for no moment is ever repeated. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

End is gateway to zero for all is true!

i love this one ashraful.

Your poem is the clock of life ticking away to zero, interesting and thoughtful poem regards

Life to find the zero Gateway is calling us Let us go to the zero cogito sum ergo

Yes, clever and covert but full of meaning to be interpreted by the reader. H

I find this a clever and philosophical poem too. We are all here to find and share love with others. 10 Karin Anderson

I quote from my poem - 'Zero Sum': - 'One plus one is zero too, - If you are no one to me, and I am no one to you! ' For your poem 10! -Raj Nandy

extreemly nice, extreemly philosophical. suggeastion, the word zero needs no 'the' before it.10shan

a well craft short poem...I like it. Thanks too, for the drop...Stay safe!

Great one as always sir..your verses are short, but those words speaks a lot, nice one 10++