Sunday, May 24, 2009

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Rating: 3.8

Tongue to vanish earnings
Eye to store memory
Money to craft demand
Friend to spend emotion
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Alf Hutchison 08 June 2009

mystifying totally mystifying...Alf

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 June 2009

Highly philosophical. So true too. Beautifully crafted. Wonderful style.

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Marieta Maglas 06 June 2009

''Livings to fertilize soil Love to enter sorrow Life to find the zero'' You say that life is for the matter and spirit is eternal and the spirit is sad when the body dies, because of love.Love is eternal and the spirits are together, after death. The separation of spirits who love each other are causing sorrow and pain .wonderful poem 10++

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Reshma Ramesh 06 June 2009

something to ponder about............

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Estrella Baldemosa 06 June 2009

Love to enter sorrow... Life to find the zero... so true...10

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 05 June 2009

thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing

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Akram Saqib 05 June 2009

good philosophical expression of life span

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amazing depth..everything is a atrap is it...well written...10

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Again so few words are used to express the ultimate truth...Kudos...10++ for the thought expressed...Brishti Mazumdar

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Sandra Fowler 03 June 2009

We must seize the moment, for no moment is ever repeated. Excellent write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ramesh T A 03 June 2009

End is gateway to zero for all is true!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 01 June 2009

i love this one ashraful.

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Ken E Hall 01 June 2009

Your poem is the clock of life ticking away to zero, interesting and thoughtful poem regards

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Life to find the zero Gateway is calling us Let us go to the zero cogito sum ergo

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Herbert Nehrlich2 01 June 2009

Yes, clever and covert but full of meaning to be interpreted by the reader. H

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I find this a clever and philosophical poem too. We are all here to find and share love with others. 10 Karin Anderson

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Raj Nandy 31 May 2009

I quote from my poem - 'Zero Sum': - 'One plus one is zero too, - If you are no one to me, and I am no one to you! ' For your poem 10! -Raj Nandy

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extreemly nice, extreemly philosophical. suggeastion, the word zero needs no 'the' before it.10shan

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Inner Whispers 31 May 2009

a well craft short poem...I like it. Thanks too, for the drop...Stay safe!

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

Great one as always sir..your verses are short, but those words speaks a lot, nice one 10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq

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