Thursday, December 13, 2012

Gate Of The Sun … 1312 - 2012 Comments

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(Puerta del Sol - Spanish)

Silent hugging clinging forms
in tangy flavour of mixed dorms
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Yasmin Khan 25 January 2013

I like the line 'clarinet saxo waft on the air' I learn a lot of vocabulary.

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Mandi June 31 December 2012

I love the description of lions in this poem! You have a gift of describing simple life experiences in such a poetic way... Keep sharing, my friend! :)

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Yewande Adedokun 23 December 2012

obviously full of word wells, complicated for me, but i see beauty through it

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