Saturday, May 18, 2024

Gasping In The Void Comments

Rating: 5.0

gasping in the void
of everything devoid
desperately paranoid
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Nullipara clouds, no rains

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Deeply poignant! Very vivid depiction of barenness. Superb imagery with nice rhyme.

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Sandra Feldman 18 May 2024

Perfect composition, denoting deep frustration, excellently expressed!

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The solace from the pregnant rain clouds never come….

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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