Saturday, September 12, 2009

Gasping For Existence Comments

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gaze me in the eyes
shudder in my cold blood
lift all which conceal
and stop the time
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stella dino
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John Ericson Millano 12 April 2010

oooh.. writer :)) continue writing stella.. hone your skills.. Ü

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Nashy Lamen 15 September 2009

Free verse... Nicely done... COntinue writing... :)

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Danzen D. 15 September 2009

Whispering..grasping...clinging..tightly...tight...gasping for breath...gasping for existence..heh heh.. A nice piece, keep writing!

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Madelene Calalo 12 September 2009

nice one.. hehe.. keep writing..

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baguio city, philippines
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