She loves him, but obsesses endlessly one day he'll love her too;
He loves himself and he alone decides her love for who;
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The faintest light that flickers with no luminosity that brings confusion and isolation and somehow love hides. An amazing and brilliant poem you have drafted from your perception.10
Lodigiana your originality and choice of theme amazes me a poetry gem to discover. You use a term of phrase I haven't heard in years and weave a moral message and brilliance around it. A great read with a superb and uplifting no nonsense closing line. Five stars and thank you for sharing your unique poetry gift, a gift that is always offering every reader something innovative and fresh. Take care. Shaun. x.