Gardens Comments

Precisely written, with sharp imagery. A short walk with vivid clarity to the thrusting point of a much deeper contemplation. Bravo, good poet! NB :)

I believe Charles (below) said it all in his comment. I loved this poem, it evoked memories of damp leaves in gardens, and the ending brings us all a jolt of realism.

beautiful language the images so strking and the tale concludes with a brutal truth of how the world works: the rich and their lands while poor folks simmer on conrete a wonderful poem