Monday, June 13, 2016

Gardens Baited With Traditional Sorrow Trap Temptations Comments

Rating: 5.0

lost in a garden big enough to hide baited sorrow
lost in a garden caught in season winter tomorrow
caught in a garden solitary trapped in feelings melancholy
paradise perfect tempered with a moment of plucked folly
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Terence George Craddock
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Annette Aitken 13 June 2016

alone in beautified garden in warm morning mist was not lonely There are many beautiful lines in this piece but somehow this one seems to really stand out for me. As it is said you can feel so alone in a crowded place. And not lonely when you are alone.

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