Limping, nay, crawling towards her garden ……(
...half-DEAD) , [ the garden! ],
Carmi, in her overalls & floppy hat, to Bri said:
"Bri, old friend, bring my tools behind me now;
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A trayful of cookies, especially Maryland Chocolat chip cookies, sounds great to me! My Word speller protests at trayful but what does it know/? Great little story.
p.s. i don't like this line, though it IS the way i submitted it, AND it's staying the way it was then! ! ! BUT if i could magically change it, i might, .... FROM: Oh! I forgot your ‘taking-care-of' husband too. [.... PH deleted the space i HAD between Oh! and I forgot! ] TO: Oh! I forgot your ' taking-care-of ' husband, a chore too. bri :) i'll give myself a 10+ anyway! !
I am an asinine gardener as well. And I like cookies (With milk) I have not encountered a high school mate in 40 years. writing this has tired me. I need a tray of something. : -)
LET THIS BE A WARNING TO OTHER POETS! F+k+g PH! ! ! In stanza # 7, PH deleted the word online [ that is O N L I N E ] which i had inside parentheses (which are STILL there!) ! . i guess it is PH's attempt to not have poets mention other computer sites? [at least NOT IN POEMS]? ? ! ! Good grief! ! ! ! i do NOT plan to change the poem as it stands now. bri :)
Poem Hunter deleted that same word in one of my poems. Remember, this website is run by Turks. Perhaps that word is a swear word in Turkish. Yet they allow filthy words to be used in other poems...
Cookies, dead scorpions all in a garden and garden shed, fine gardening presented in your scintillating amusing way as usual. I should always pop in to read yours when I need exotic matter laughs. Didn't know they had hot sun or desert in the west too. Kudos for this funtastic poem. Soo nice to read from your inking again, Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too titled, a tribute to every new poem