Saturday, January 27, 2018

Garden Zone Comments

Rating: 4.5

G-arden zone is gigantic,
E-very walk inside is lovely;
S-ee the pleasant plants,
E-yes shall smile in glee.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 January 2018

I agree with this piece totally. If we feel and see beautiful things in life it is incumbent for us to share and let people know. A wise acrostic write.10

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Judith Blatherwick 27 January 2018

This is so serene. Very beautiful to read.

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Haoran T 27 January 2018

It's very creative and poetic. It inspires me to write a similar style like that.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 January 2018

Very nice and another creative acrostic using names. I just wrote one after I read your acrostic poem- it is a challenging poetry form indeed. Brilliant work!

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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