Wednesday, August 17, 2016

Garden Tryst Comments

Rating: 5.0

We will arrive in our Garden
at the same moment, as the leaves
are soaking up the food of light
and waving their health into the air
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Daniel Brick
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2023

A solitary bird perches high above us on a maple tree.....beautiful poetry!

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Bharati Nayak 02 May 2017

Which stanza to quote? Every stanza carries the lilac scent of your heart that will overwhelm any passerby.

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Daniel Brick 02 May 2017

THE LILAC SCENT OF YOUR HEART - What a wonderful metaphor you made from the poem's imagery! !

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 August 2016

Wow! That is a love poem that hits every part of the senses. I love the image, can smell, the flowers, the love spinning around the lovers. How romantic.

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Nosheen Irfan 24 August 2016

So beautifully written. Exuding peace n serenity, this poem illuminates the reader's heart. The joy n calm of a garden tryst is beautifully portrayed and the element of romance lends it warmth. Full of lovely imagery, this poem reminds me of Keatsian sensuality. Loved every bit of it.

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Liza Sudina 18 August 2016

It is about a strong passion. A flop into each other. run, odor, nature - reminds me dogs and their instinctive freedom. Very exiting!

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Sandra Feldman 17 August 2016

Flows with the grace and beauty of love and light, A poem that will last forever. and a night. And those with feelings, those that read, Will be embraces by a Shakespeareani Summer Night Dream's, breeze

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