We will arrive in our Garden
at the same moment, as the leaves
are soaking up the food of light
and waving their health into the air
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Which stanza to quote? Every stanza carries the lilac scent of your heart that will overwhelm any passerby.
THE LILAC SCENT OF YOUR HEART - What a wonderful metaphor you made from the poem's imagery! !
Wow! That is a love poem that hits every part of the senses. I love the image, can smell, the flowers, the love spinning around the lovers. How romantic.
So beautifully written. Exuding peace n serenity, this poem illuminates the reader's heart. The joy n calm of a garden tryst is beautifully portrayed and the element of romance lends it warmth. Full of lovely imagery, this poem reminds me of Keatsian sensuality. Loved every bit of it.
It is about a strong passion. A flop into each other. run, odor, nature - reminds me dogs and their instinctive freedom. Very exiting!
Flows with the grace and beauty of love and light, A poem that will last forever. and a night. And those with feelings, those that read, Will be embraces by a Shakespeareani Summer Night Dream's, breeze
A solitary bird perches high above us on a maple tree.....beautiful poetry!