Soul in the garden of love
It's like paradise on earth
Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet
Fresh energetic buds ready to burst
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Withered on the ground never you knew this will be the end when you return.. Does love life give only wound? ... .. charming poem
Such a heartfelt poem about love and loss. The ending of the poem is the highlight of the piece. Does love life give only wound? Brilliantly penned.
So lovely poem, , , , , , right 10 No narrow path Thursday,6th September 2018 it has the capacity to make it flowery Love has no narrow path it makes you breathe, freely without the fear of death and keeps intact your commitment to the faith Hasmukh Amathaal Mehta
Ever such beautiful heart, with such beauty within, with such beautiful love, to share and to give! .. To love so true is such a beautiful thing, even when God ends up comforting! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Beautifully written. And yes, we all come back to the last line, the question of 'wound', despite all the beauties in the garden. Love it!
I keep revisiting this beautiful poem....Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet....These beautiful lines are magnificent.
This by far is your best poetry, you have done it in this poem! ! ! This should be poem of the day, rarely do I see a poem this well penned! !
A wonderfully creative write that fills the heart with delight.
So beautifully inscribed. A marvelous poem on love shared nicely. Thank u dear Rini.
Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee Filled me with beauty and added colors to my life. stolen all my charm...my elangance Does love life give only wound? .....// Thanks for sharing a philosophical poem.
I am lost in your ardent aroma..what a charming line? The piece of work is simple in its totality but carries a lot of implications....I loved the poem the words have been place! Congrats
You sucked my nectar everyday.. Flew away I couldn't see.. Filled and stored all your hive.. You have stolen all my charm... lost my elangance The beauty of losing elegance, the contentment in satisfying someone's desires, the real elegance is there in being stolen to the ultimate level, when the one stealing it is the one you love most. A nice topic chosen by the great poetess to surface her hidden talent, treasure of love and passion within heart, stored for the dream prince. Thanks for sharing this poem. 10++++
The answer is No, it gives birth to great thought processes like this one from you. As Shelley had rightly said that our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought
You are right Avik.. When our songs are more sweet when it comes from pain
When one is young and love ensues why don't you all initial Caps lose that's for compy's need not poetry indeed See this as an example young lady and its so difficult to trace your comments so you may PM them.. Thanks Try this typing version and see your own reflection in your poetic version lady poet will ye My Best wishes to thee
This is the ambiguity of human love: it can seem so wonderful now but decline into nothing then. Now versus then. How do we keep love a garden and not let it become wasteland? Your poem suggests a natural process of fulfillment followed by dissatisfaction. If that's true we must weed the garden and cultivate new flowers. We need the garden in our lives, we need true love in our lives.
Very true Daniel we must weed the garden and cultivate new flowers.. Thanks
Does love life give only wound? Love won't give wound but expectations do... nice presentation of ideas.
Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee came near and whispered to me Am lost in your ardent aroma.. You are my life, you are my world.. full of passion and love. tony