Saturday, April 29, 2017

Garden Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.7

Soul in the garden of love
It's like paradise on earth
Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet
Fresh energetic buds ready to burst
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Antony Theodore 05 November 2020

Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee came near and whispered to me Am lost in your ardent aroma.. You are my life, you are my world.. full of passion and love. tony

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Prabir Gayen 08 February 2020

Withered on the ground never you knew this will be the end when you return.. Does love life give only wound? ... .. charming poem

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Aqua Flower 10 October 2018

Such a heartfelt poem about love and loss. The ending of the poem is the highlight of the piece. Does love life give only wound? Brilliantly penned.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 September 2018

So lovely poem, , , , , , right 10 No narrow path Thursday,6th September 2018 it has the capacity to make it flowery Love has no narrow path it makes you breathe, freely without the fear of death and keeps intact your commitment to the faith Hasmukh Amathaal Mehta

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Rebecca Navarre 29 August 2018

Ever such beautiful heart, with such beauty within, with such beautiful love, to share and to give! .. To love so true is such a beautiful thing, even when God ends up comforting! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Aj Anwar 09 July 2018

Beautifully written. And yes, we all come back to the last line, the question of 'wound', despite all the beauties in the garden. Love it!

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Robert Murray Smith 11 June 2018

I keep revisiting this beautiful poem....Twinkling stars wrapped in black carpet....These beautiful lines are magnificent.

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Ramesh Rai 01 June 2018

Marvelous. Soul is the garden of love. Fabulous.10+++++

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Bill Cantrell 10 May 2018

This by far is your best poetry, you have done it in this poem! ! ! This should be poem of the day, rarely do I see a poem this well penned! !

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Robert Murray Smith 15 April 2018

A wonderfully creative write that fills the heart with delight.

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Rini Shibu 15 April 2018

Thanks Robert for revisiting..! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2018

So beautifully inscribed. A marvelous poem on love shared nicely. Thank u dear Rini.

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Rini shibu 12 April 2018

Thanks Kumar for reading this poem.., ! !

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Bipasha D 14 January 2018

No Rini, love life is sometimes the balm...

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Rini Shibu 15 January 2018

Thanks.. It's mixture of all

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Sakalabaktula Sairaj 04 December 2017

its wonderful.. so nice one keep it up dear

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Rini Shibu 04 December 2017

Thanks Sairaj

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Rajnish Manga 20 October 2017

Fragrance of my nectar allured honey bee Filled me with beauty and added colors to my life. stolen all my charm...my elangance Does love life give only wound? .....// Thanks for sharing a philosophical poem.

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Rini Shibu 20 October 2017

Thanks for reading this poem Rajnish

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 September 2017

I am lost in your ardent aroma..what a charming line? The piece of work is simple in its totality but carries a lot of implications....I loved the poem the words have been place! Congrats

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Rini Shibu 30 September 2017

Thank you so much Dillip for visiting this poem.. Rini

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 September 2017

You sucked my nectar everyday.. Flew away I couldn't see.. Filled and stored all your hive.. You have stolen all my charm... lost my elangance The beauty of losing elegance, the contentment in satisfying someone's desires, the real elegance is there in being stolen to the ultimate level, when the one stealing it is the one you love most. A nice topic chosen by the great poetess to surface her hidden talent, treasure of love and passion within heart, stored for the dream prince. Thanks for sharing this poem. 10++++

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Rini Shibu 23 September 2017

Thank you so much subhas..nice remarks

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Avik Datta Gupta 20 September 2017

The answer is No, it gives birth to great thought processes like this one from you. As Shelley had rightly said that our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thought

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Rini Shibu 21 September 2017

You are right Avik.. When our songs are more sweet when it comes from pain

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2017

When one is young and love ensues why don't you all initial Caps lose that's for compy's need not poetry indeed See this as an example young lady and its so difficult to trace your comments so you may PM them.. Thanks Try this typing version and see your own reflection in your poetic version lady poet will ye My Best wishes to thee

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Rini Shibu 16 September 2017

Thanks for your suggestions poet.. Will see to it

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Daniel Brick 13 September 2017

This is the ambiguity of human love: it can seem so wonderful now but decline into nothing then. Now versus then. How do we keep love a garden and not let it become wasteland? Your poem suggests a natural process of fulfillment followed by dissatisfaction. If that's true we must weed the garden and cultivate new flowers. We need the garden in our lives, we need true love in our lives.

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Rini Shibu 14 September 2017

Very true Daniel we must weed the garden and cultivate new flowers.. Thanks

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Viju J 12 September 2017

Does love life give only wound? Love won't give wound but expectations do... nice presentation of ideas.

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Rini Shibu 12 September 2017

Thanks viju for your comments.. Yes you are right expectations do

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