Early morning.
When the birds sing,
I hear you.
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Haven't forgotten you Jibin, just haven't been around much for a while due to packing to move house. This is a starry-eyed poem. Such a pleasure to read, amorous and tender in its words. Very well presented too. I liked it a a lot. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Wonderful, joseph. I like it alot. A touching love poem, expressing only what the five senses should have been made for.......love.
Psychosomatic Syndrome would be thrilling title for this poem...
Garden of five senses is very unique. So much is said and it's lovely.
What a wonderful garden you paint, Jibin. I'm awestruck because you are able to express so much in so few words, and it's still entirely passionate and warm. The way you've summed up love by the person being everywhere is genius. This would have been the Ultimate Romantic's Love Note. Delicious. -L.C.
Spare, elegant and very effective. Wonderful work, Jibin. Warm regards, Sandra
This is superb poem written with intensity of passion and maintained throughout the poem. Wise use of few words to great effect.
Ever so romantic, gentle... the imagery calls to the soul of the nature lover. I love this. Esther : ]
Garden of 5 senses...this one smells good, looks great, tastes divine, feels lovely and most of all rings musically in my ears! Superb!
That poem is really beautiful. Your poetry just gets better! Keep writing!
i feel the breeze of love caressing me in a garden full of flowers...really beautiful poem...with very few words you can express so wonderfully well....
This was a very beautiful piece..cultivating love and care