Sunday, November 18, 2012

Garden Of Eden Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sunbeams, with bundles of fun,
Shining, shimmering green quest,
A new nest, in garden of eden's best,
My soul is calm here, even with all, my unsung fears,
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Hazel Durham
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Chinedu Dike 24 April 2019

Full of life and spirit, a smooth flow for joy. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Hazel.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2015

I have passed life's test, In the magnificence of the garden of eden's best. Beautiful.

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

congratulations on the garden of eden, love this poem

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Vishal Sharma 05 April 2013

vibrant and energetic poem, , , only one word..WOW..

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Sanjibsaha Aniketa 22 December 2012

'Life is a serenade' ...' love is found'.... ' I have passed the life's test ' ... more & more - So positive that can inspire everyone. Very good poem.

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Sandra Feldman 21 December 2012

Wow, you found the Garden of Eden, Congratulations, what a beautiful and poetic way to let All know.

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Clarence Prince 21 December 2012

A real lovely poem in its entirety, nonetheless, it's the last verse, which grabs me best! Thanks for sharing, Hazel!

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Kanav Justa 20 December 2012

So much of positive energy i felt after reading this.... a great write

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Kanav Justa 20 December 2012

So much of positive energy i felt after reading this.... a great write

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Israel Ugwu 19 December 2012

What's the poem all about?

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Owain Glyn 12 December 2012

Vibrant, excitable and very, very good!

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I love the charisma expressed in this poem. It has a wonderful vibe to it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 27 November 2012

A fine poem of positive energy.

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Jais Mani 26 November 2012

the magical simplicity f the poem and its tuneful music greatly add to its charm.....i super liked ur poem

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Neela Nath Das 25 November 2012

So soothing are your diction! They took my cares away. Very lovely. Kudos!

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Sayeed Abubakar 20 November 2012

Love is shouting here from the fields, every tree, every dazzling mountain view, My heart sings a never-ending haunting tune- Excelent lines. Unforgetable. Dangerous imagery. Keep it up.

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Asif Andalib 18 November 2012

Beautiful imagery and metaphors and great flow of words and emotions. I really enjoyed your wonderful write

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Hans Vr 18 November 2012

Wonderful optimism and positive thinking in this very well written poem Excellent work

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