Sunbeams, with bundles of fun,
Shining, shimmering green quest,
A new nest, in garden of eden's best,
My soul is calm here, even with all, my unsung fears,
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I have passed life's test, In the magnificence of the garden of eden's best. Beautiful.
'Life is a serenade' ...' love is found'.... ' I have passed the life's test ' ... more & more - So positive that can inspire everyone. Very good poem.
Wow, you found the Garden of Eden, Congratulations, what a beautiful and poetic way to let All know.
A real lovely poem in its entirety, nonetheless, it's the last verse, which grabs me best! Thanks for sharing, Hazel!
So much of positive energy i felt after reading this.... a great write
So much of positive energy i felt after reading this.... a great write
I love the charisma expressed in this poem. It has a wonderful vibe to it.
the magical simplicity f the poem and its tuneful music greatly add to its charm.....i super liked ur poem
So soothing are your diction! They took my cares away. Very lovely. Kudos!
Love is shouting here from the fields, every tree, every dazzling mountain view, My heart sings a never-ending haunting tune- Excelent lines. Unforgetable. Dangerous imagery. Keep it up.
Beautiful imagery and metaphors and great flow of words and emotions. I really enjoyed your wonderful write
Wonderful optimism and positive thinking in this very well written poem Excellent work
Full of life and spirit, a smooth flow for joy. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Hazel.