Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Garden Of Death (Recommended) Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the garden of death,
I stand tall.
My head held high,
Where all hope usually falls.
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Ridah Ellahi
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Justice For All 22 March 2009

i read most of your poems and they were great... but these i cann't say anything 10++++

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Tobias Gray 22 March 2009

amazing! very powerful write!

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Sadiqullah Khan 21 March 2009

Nice, but talk of love and sweetness. lovely write, keep the good work going.10

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Mehreen Mujeeb 24 February 2009

Very well expressed, thanks for sharing :)

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Oscar Cantu 21 February 2009

A good poem. Enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work.

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Corey Threet 20 February 2009

Great write I really enjoyed this poem seein as I love rhyming poems and your rhyme scheme was excellent. Once again great write and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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rago rago 19 February 2009

well craft........descriptive emotional poem........great piece.......nice work.......keep writing.10+++ from lago

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Lisa French 18 February 2009

Amazing poem! You've rhymed it very well. Great work! ! ! Keep it up =]

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Joseph Poewhit 18 February 2009

We all have our gardens of life experiences. Our soul is the bottom line of all experience. Only to wait for GODS JUDGMENT

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Patti fatti 18 February 2009

Hello Dear, I am old school; love it when something has rhyme and rhythm. Plus you had something to say, a story, an experience? And said it well.....

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