Garden In Town Comments

I am glad that my humble words contributed substantially to add a rich conclusion to a meaningful poem, I am honored. Yes, all open spaces be turned into parks...thank you so much!

Based on Shahzia Batool's comment I added the last stanza. Many thanks for the comments.

Garden in town! ! ! though you have written in past narration but i feel it as you have shared your desire of making more gardens in every town...as we are away from nature, and we need to refresh our bond with nature! a good poem!

There are enough shops, but not enough gardens, so this was a very good choice. Good one Tirupathi.