Saturday, February 21, 2009

Garden Gate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I passed your garden gate,
It rattled to and fro.
I don't remember it this way,
The gate I used to know.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Margaret O Driscoll 20 February 2016

A beautiful poem, moving and heartfelt

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Oscar Cantu 26 April 2009

A beautiful well written poem, thank you so much for sharing your poems with us.

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Cristy Upshaw 18 April 2009

Extremely touching, splendor lies in each word and tales a tale of great wonderment and beauty.

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Sherrie Tappenden 13 April 2009

a poignant and gentle journey into realisation and acceptance.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 08 April 2009

So Beautiful - a real tonic for the mind - emotions sway and drew me to the final word which left me spellbound...Thank you

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Stephen Stirk 17 March 2009

Lovely rhyme and balance. I like the way this flows, and the story within the poem. I write in a similar way paying particular attention to rythmn and rhyme. This is traditional rhyming poetry at its best, with a touch that seems to be sadly lacking today. Steve

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D. Allen Hemingway 11 March 2009

A lovely poem. I like the way you change the scene of the garden gate with each stanza.

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Truly a beautiful poem and the theme Garden Gate is timeless. Excellent writing Greenwolfe. Karin Anderson

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Chitra - 27 February 2009

another masterpiece...captivating

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Marilyn Lott 25 February 2009

A sweet, delicious love poem with lovely rhyme and rhythm. Loved it. A '10+! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Meggie Gultiano 25 February 2009

For just beyond your garden gate My destiny was cast. A place from where no man returns. I found you there at last. ____________________________ I truly love to read and re read your ending your lines shows a heart expecting to be reconciled to who ever who you wanted to be with and the joy of finding and waiting to be embraced at last wish i can write like this of this kind, Wolfey but my mind is only limited to write words so easy but rest assured, i will be here for you, and read you the inner thoughts you shared so gentle, wise and true. Lovely write, Wolfey, , again, ..a pleasure always and always to read. take care of you, Hugs and God bless, Meggie

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Ency Bearis 23 February 2009

nice to read and a beautiful write..great works..

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Emancipation Planz 22 February 2009

Today beyond, puriri tree Bluebird fluttered on by I wondered if she'd land on me My precious one from sky... Again Wolfey.. you sing song well with this one... t'all that is missing really is the white picket fence... another stanza perhaps? ? ?

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Chenna Linda 22 February 2009

great work as always... it amazing how we keep going back to that one person/ thing were our hearts find peace. beautiful!

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Naidz Ladia 21 February 2009

your words are really apprecieated by me hundreds of appreciations i'll give to you your ryhming words are nice to see lined with decently penned words for everybody... dear greeney, , , , keep writing, , , , , modesty inside this poem is visible..so cheers, , , , if i were to be asked......this is excellent..... naizz

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Duh Huh 21 February 2009

All hail another of the great poets in here. I feel so unworthy but so honored to have found such a place to read the hearts of such beautiful souls.

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fabulous. The last stanza did int he piece well.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 21 February 2009

I think I am not endowed with the kind of language that can match the greatness of this poem to comment........How a distanced friend could be addressed, only Greenwolfe knows.........Hats off! ! ! ! !

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ata khan 21 February 2009

a nice read, beautiful flow thanks for writing and sharing

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