Monday, May 18, 2009

Garden Center Comments

Rating: 5.0

There she sits in the midst of my garden
beneath the roses and poses;
delighting in the daffodils like those on the hill.
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 April 2010

Ma’am …Values of Life, ‘chameleonic righteous… Destroy the lies, then /bury them in a sand hole….’ Righteousness is becoming rare and flowers are afraid to bloom…lol… The gardener hushing…in despair and desperation…and You’ve shown the positive sides as poets are…mostly …’ look at how she takes great pleasure’… Indeed a great use of metaphor…in you uncanny way… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Claude H Oliver Ii 28 November 2009

A metaphor for the garden of life.

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Obinna Eruchie 31 August 2009

A beautiful poem. 'Destroy the lies, then/ bury them in a sand hole./ only in her rich garden flowers grow/ look at how she takes great pleasure/ in tending her garden and share/ the fruits of her labor.

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