Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Garden~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today the blooms lean a little to the left of center- -
Weighted down by the rushing rains
Petals soft - yet flourishing with abundance;
The Garden - a masterpiece
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Pamela Sinicrope 07 May 2016

This is a truly beautiful poem about the garden. I've been reading and writing about gardens all day. I think its the spring. Your poem here is a visual piece of art. Love the imagery you use: weighted down by light petals, swooning hummungbirds....and then the unqualified gardener who still manages to yield such a masterpiece. Who's seeds? ;) I'm saving this one.

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