Friday, January 13, 2006

Garbage...... Comments

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It's time to take the garbage out
to pile beside the street.
It symbolizes what we've done
for people we won't meet.
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Mary Nagy
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Brian Dorn 20 July 2006

Mary, I like the effect of how you extended the words 'r e a l s l o w.' Anyway, don't you hate nosey neighbors... good write! ! Brian

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Duncan Wyllie 29 March 2006

I'm glad that you never threw this one out. A Diamond in the dust.We must at least try to take people as a whole.Love Duncan

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Ronberge .. 01 February 2006

I enjoyed it. Amicalement votre Ronberge

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Ernestine Northover 14 January 2006

This one gave me a chuckle Mary, It's amazing what other people will go for, things that you have chucked out as worthless. Loved this write. A story in itself for sure. Love Ernestine XXX

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Uriah Hamilton 13 January 2006

Save the good stuff! ! lol

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Alice Vedral Rivera 13 January 2006

Mary - you have a knack for taking the mundane and making it interesting. avr

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Michael Shepherd 13 January 2006

It's a fun poem anyway, Mary! Thanks for joining in, you're a good sport, as we say here in our whathochaps voices...

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Rusty Daily 13 January 2006

One ad was for body jewelry and the next for wrinkle cream. What was it you threw away Mary? lol Rusty

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Mary Nagy 13 January 2006

Ok, please understand, this poem was posted only as part of the ''Let's see what we can get to come up on the ads above our poems''. :) It's not one I would exactly show the in-laws! But, thanks for reading it!

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