Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Game With Stars Comments

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He lay on a dark, deserted isle,
With eyes fixed at stars above;
Face lighted with a smile so big
No vigilant God, would allow.
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Pradeep Dhavakumar
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Nalini Hebbar 02 August 2006

this is a great poem pradeep...there are a few things i would like to see you change...i will write a personal message...love...nalini

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