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One bright summer day,
the children were happily playing.
Hide and seek in every corner
they’re screaming and singing
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reading, the last line really pains the reader's mind...the material there is shocking to mind though, the style of narration is good and vivid...a ten for your poem, Joan
a nice write and well describe of how beast can overcome the weak.. great poem... Ency Bearis
A very hard piece to write, and you done it so well 10+ regards Tom my poem 'Lost' similar please read
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7/20/2025 6:09:57 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful composition. The form of the poem is very nice.