Game Over Comments

well written. you are very lucky.

Smooth, nice read man. Good luck with her

I loved the ending of the poem Game over. She is my heavenly sent and I am taking her home.

she is very lucky, the poem is well written with full emotion....i like the poem as i like mine......please read some of mine.........

simple and captivating, i like the mood of excitement, , keep up

simple and capturing i like the mood......keep it up

I liked it, well written, keep up the good work Young Church.

Game over. She is my heavenly sent and I am taking her home. Well written, young church.