Friday, November 6, 2015

Game Of Masquerade Comments

Rating: 5.0

I place my mind on the corner of sidewalk
And watch how the strangers
Melt down in the mouth of subway,
Wearing your face above their dwarf necks.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Shakil Ahmed 07 November 2015

nice poem, thanks for sharing, these line are very beautiful, And I can’t tear up their playful mask As my hands are tied up with our drifted love.

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Loke Kok Yee 06 November 2015

place your mind elsewhere! anywhere but a subway thanks-10

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M Asim Nehal 06 November 2015

Heartfelt, In love we go thru many emotional changes....the melancholy part in your poem is amusing with hands tied it is difficult to express true feelings as we are deeply drowned in love........Loved it. Full marks.

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