Sunday, January 13, 2019

Game Of Love - Like Chess Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like a chess board
I have certain limitations
I am the King and
She is the Queen
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 24 July 2020

You made this game very interesting and enjoyable. Who is protecting whom is new question now.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 January 2019

If the game of love ends still love shines in core of memory. King and queen unite through a chess card. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Gordon Walter 14 January 2019

Out of the box poem for me. specially after reading so many different interpretations.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2019

ADDITION: A 10 and much much more for the Voting marks. According to PH. According ti me, your poem deserve more much more. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your dear family.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2019

(2) ...queen and also her husband the king, then there will certainly be a coming love's perils. Apart from these things, is this poem excellently thought and created, since the topic is love. And I also enjoyed reading time and again this poetry about my most favourite game: Chess. It is a game of gaining territorium and not a love game, my dear Poet. A game about conquering the enemy's land. But I have truly enjoyed your poem, since I love the chess play.

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Cont....2 You must have also seen in present times the love between two belonging to different sects, caste, creed, religion and social status and the same is opposed by their parents, society etc...This very thought inspired me to write this poem with a philosophical and imaginative touch...Cont 3

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Cont 3.... I assumed it as a game of chess where king falls in love with the queen of opposition's/ different kingdom. Imagine such situation where everybody else is fighting to win over each other by killing these two silent lovers are making their moves to get united. And unlike the game of chess where all are fighting tooth and nails to win. A game of Love is played within the chess board limitation. I hope now you will read and appreciate.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2019

(1) I am not here to contradict, but only to read and enjoy, but since I myself play chess, I have to say, unfortunately, that chess is a game of winning-conquering-conquering other people's territories / recapturing through very well thought-out tactics, and unfortunately I can not find anything of love in the chess play I usually play. BUT, if you mean from your view that by conquering that one kingdom you also imprison the

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Thank you so much for your viewpoint and valuable comments, I really appreciate it. I shall put my thoughts across as to what made me to chose this title and write this poem. I am sure you must have heard, seen and read many stories on Love between the sons and daughters of two enemy kingdom.....Cont 2

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T Rajan Evol 14 January 2019

A game of love played on a chess board of life and instead of imagery figures they are human lives. Great poem MAN.10

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Thx Much T Rajan Ji....

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