Saturday, June 2, 2012

Game Of Flower And Rain Comments

Rating: 4.5

I thought you were cloud
But came down as a rain
In my life made a flood
Kissed my petals wetly
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Abdul Wahab
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eloida Capuno 06 June 2012

Flower and rain, great metaphors. Your poem is capable of different interpretations, i had mine, (wink)

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