Game Poem by Rachel Butler

Game



(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)


Antecedently my ears loved afore mine eyes,
I heard his voice, their commendations.

His entralling ways disarmed my guarded heart,
seasoned, went my maidenhood.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Queeny Gona 14 July 2016

Amazing read ma'am! The vocabulary chosen is so apt that it speaks much of the incident! Disarming the guarded heart,

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C. P. Sharma 04 March 2012

Rachel, you completely over take the reader, there is mystical magic in your words.

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Jake Deeds 29 October 2011

'His entralling ways disarmed my guarded heart, seasoned, went my maidenhood.' Wow...as we say in Arkansas....he must've been sump'n! ! ! I love your poetry, Rachel....<

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