Tuesday, February 24, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

a flesh of clouds is medicine for
prophetic dreams
killed by a wind of wished desires
as the chain of silence - swiped in a tomorrow
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Barry A. Lanier 08 March 2009

Thinking this poem has merit, , , , clear concise....and metrically flowing....

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