Friday, May 15, 2020

Gambling Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a bar having no walls, no doors, no windows
sitting on a chair and resting my head on the table,
between my elbows,
thinking how helpless I am, how much feeble!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 21 May 2020

A nice thought so nicely penned as a poem.

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A fascinating and entertaining write with a meaningful message. The effects of gambling is brilliantly depicted in this highly imaginative poem. Beautifully crafted.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 May 2020

A brilliant poem about the consequences of two sides of gambling! The poet's poetic involvement into the scenario of gambling makes it amazing! Beautifully composed....10

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Michael Walkerjohn 15 May 2020

Aloha and Cheers Akntar... Well Mate... the poet's notes are a bit more revealing of your intentions... Life is indeed a gamble... To Covid or not to Covid... Whatever! And is not the concept of " God" , " Alien" to most of the human species? 'Mighty' and most likely so... or do you believe this is not the case? IAM going to seer your post for a bit... and fly the results... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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