In a bar having no walls, no doors, no windows
sitting on a chair and resting my head on the table,
between my elbows,
thinking how helpless I am, how much feeble!
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A fascinating and entertaining write with a meaningful message. The effects of gambling is brilliantly depicted in this highly imaginative poem. Beautifully crafted.
A brilliant poem about the consequences of two sides of gambling! The poet's poetic involvement into the scenario of gambling makes it amazing! Beautifully composed....10
Aloha and Cheers Akntar... Well Mate... the poet's notes are a bit more revealing of your intentions... Life is indeed a gamble... To Covid or not to Covid... Whatever! And is not the concept of " God" , " Alien" to most of the human species? 'Mighty' and most likely so... or do you believe this is not the case? IAM going to seer your post for a bit... and fly the results... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of our relations... Michaelw1two
A nice thought so nicely penned as a poem.