With the stroke of your hand
You splattered upon me
The Jackson Pollock stains
Of your sometimes love
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WOW Did you ever succeed in combining your three passions - art, poem, romance - with such energetic language. In fact, energy is the key to this poem, it is the force which makes these various endeavors happen, without it each would be still-born or non-existent. You cited four painters, very different from each other, but in this poem they can stand together on its common ground and contribute their particular strengths to the poem. This poem captures so vividly the process of painting, the sheer sloppiness of working with colors - and feelings.
Beautiful poem, I like the way you compare art and love, true love is a rare masterpiece. And I really like Dali and Monet. I don't know Jackson Pollock I'm not really into abstract, but there is certainly a lot of abstract in love
Oh my, I kneel and bow at the poetess' feet Amazing write! A+