Tuesday, June 28, 2022

Galaxy Woman Comments

Rating: 4.8

An infant that is being breast fed by a blind mother,
A deaf and dumb woman doesn't know her child's father,
Millions, billions or trillions years ago she cannot remember,
There was no time no January no June, no July, no December,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 September 2022

sir, it's an outstanding poem. My pleasure revisiting this galactic poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2022

A very thought provoking poem so beautifully crafted. A great poem.

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bri edwards 17 August 2022

and I WANT TO SEND Akhtar a message but am unable to do so. Hmm? Akhtar, can YOU contact ME? ? bri : )

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bri edwards 17 August 2022

i WANT TO LEAVE A COMMENT ON Tolerance POEM'S PAGE BUT i FIND NO SPACE TO LEAVE A COMMENT. : (

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Nosheen Irfan 31 July 2022

Very well penned. A meaningful write.

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Bri Edwards 17 July 2022

I gave it 4 stars and sent to my favorites. : ) btw, I submitted my July 2022 showcase & hope it shows up soon. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 July 2022

My friend, Akhtar, I like this Galaxy Woman. I wonder if YOU are the Galaxy Man (or G. Amoeba) . Hmm?

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