Galaxy Of Light Poem by Ross Mabey

Galaxy Of Light

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Poem - Galaxy of Light.

By - Ross Mabey.

I feel the warm wind blowing from the desert,
As I gaze at the star filled sky at night.
I just look in awe and wonder,
At this magnificent, galaxy of light.

Feeling lost, like a grain of sand in that desert,
I know that somehow, that I'm part of,
This universal picture,
An atom of, the creator's divine love.

Somehow, I feel so much closer,
To those,  who are dearest to my heart.
This light inspired wonder, has me humbled,
By its amazing, living work of art.

Copyright © 2008. Ross James Mabey.

Saturday, August 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: light
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 15 August 2020

full of imagination; beautiful; enjoyably written

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Deluke Muwanigwa 15 August 2020

Good one. I feel though that the rhyming could be tweaked to make it more rhythmic...if you wanted to rhyme that is....kkkkkk....i love rhyming i force rhymes silly oft times and it destroys the mood. Anywhere........

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