Pointillist patterns embellish the night,
which follows farewell of the sun-long day,
as journeys the moon's mercurial light
across the vast panoramic display.
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You are a blessing not only to poetry but to those that embrace deep thought, oh how I would love to talk about the concepts of galactic beginnings over coffee with you, but in terms of optic observation of the cosmic canvas by Einstein’s celestial vision slight of hand analogy.....my goodness, that in itself is something to be lectured over a few semesters at least! ! ! Just a marvel of a poem my friend, I will read this again..we do love mysteries of the deep cosmos...thank you! ! ! !
I am really glad you like the poem! It is always such a pleasure to read your comments! Whenever I undertake a poem, particularly one about the cosmos, I end up learning a lot, too. So it is often an adventure for me as well. I am truly encouraged and reassured to know through your feedback that my work communicates what I hope it will! Thank you very much for your ongoing support!
Magical and generous, this poem makes you want to come back to it regularly.
It is gratifying to know that the poem makes you feel that way. Thank you for reading it and for sharing your reaction.