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Realistic.Reminicent of international news.

Hon’ble Poet Obed Dela Cruz I welcome your comment/critique…as always Thanks for your kind favor to my poetries Regards niv PS: To my little knowledge every Poet convey thro' poetry subtle/expressive message isn't it? ==== Copy to Obed Dela Cruz

is this your story? ? ? anyway, looking at the way you wrote it, no bad comment....

Don't take too much medication.

''Firing squared lotteried For Ceausescu'' nice political poem, thank you for sharing 10/10/10

yes every one thinks that he's doing the right thing, so he/she does it...it's a problem of conscience.... concerning wars (iraq/vietnam/hiroshima nagazaki/world war and the fight in palestine) , we shall know that whoever is the first to begin the fight is the bad guy.that's very easy to tell. but concerning the global warming, that's the life cycle..we have to burn fuel to live.Muhammad told the muslims that the life won't end unless the deserts become forests and the forests become deserts..and scientist nowadays said that too because that is what the accumulation of heat will do. thanks for sharing

Right or wrong, with this poem you have reached new heights. Your friend, Lynn

Once again a deeply contemplative poem…not between right and wrong but between two rights…since dawn of civilization… Poet encompassed Politics Morality Emotion Economy Literati Satire of BBC is befitting Will workable [not absolute] pH 7 come? So Poet can stop gulping Valium five loll… 10++

Right and Wrong …two Rights on these themes our reasoning and thoughts spin and evolute …this evolution is unending and ever improvising [for the optimistic] …highly ethnic, religious, social, demographical, lingual… Over all unique individual idiosyncrasy foible and it is always editable and amendable by proper education WEonderful poetic satire used as BBC = BedBugConcord enjoyed thro’ and thro’ 10++

BBC hah…hah…hah…wonderful imagination [bed bug is wise wow! ! ] … Neutrality 7 can never be attained… Unlike common men poets are optimistic…what’s wrong to put more butter on imaginative biriany…will cost nothing [Sd Mujtaba Ali] …never hike blood lipid level… [Today’s health freaks buffs] …excellent composition… And for soprano [read wise bedbug] 10++

...Good one... Nothing is wrong/right... Its only a social perspective of one perception.... u cooked the globe...

Wow.. Superb.... fine script of intelligentsia... What's wrong if entire earth demolish? .. nothing... It's just a molecule in entire universe... This is certainly one of my most favorite poem.. Thank you

highly intriguing and thought provoking!

Right and wrong - it is a question of interpretation but if tears follow a certain act, it can't be right. We have to refrain from that act. Those who suffer will say that wrong things are responsible for their sufferings - we have to listen to their words. So long as we haven't suffered a situation, we have no right to say that the sufferer is wrong in his interpretation of the situation. Physical, material and mental destruction always lead people to suffer. Can't we avoid the situation with our insight? Unconditional love is the only solution for a better and peaceful living. The rest are all only speculations for a peaceful living. Mankind will never achieve his goal by rebellious and revengeful attitude. It will only produce more sufferers. A kind word we can always offer to the world. A pat we can always do to people around us. A critical view we can always avoid. A small service we can always offer to the world. Are we doing these at our own levels? Then, how can we judge what is right and wrong? We are traitors and traders in my opinion. Are we the sufferers? This is the basic question. Are we inhuman? This is answered to be first.

Canvas is well spread and fast wheeling back … on right and wrong …the contemplation …will ever go on … we’ve to find out workable right … without jeopardizing others’ rights …very good and relevant agenda has been poetically framed thanks Poet 10++ Dr. V

Poets are mirror of pre and contemporary events…like conscience stirrer …of the slothful psyche…here I find that vigil… not to happen again...a message....let us contemplate on and on… thanks for such a good poem… 10+

10/10 for this noteworthy volume of world events...a sharply subtle write...with indelible mixing of reality and spirituality

Quest to find One Right [Omniright] universally applicable is a utopian fantasy…but the point raised by the poet is valid…as …now we call earth is a Global Village [enthusiastic prefer Global Villa]… so why not titrate out 1 universally acceptable postulation … 10 dr. sakti

Awareness of history as well as human socities is highly desirable for a creative person.. Right or Wrong is a relative term.All these issues come to the mind of this poet naturally and thus a poem was created.The last three stanzas are wonderful which made this poem nice to read.Thanks Niv....

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