Monday, September 11, 2006

(g) 4 (Biographical) Friends Comments

Rating: 3.7

When I was slipping into the abyss fast and deep
My world was falling apart; my senses frozen and numb
Relationship of long falling apart; suddenly been orphaned
Demons were calling me; Justed wanted to succumb
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
COMMENTS
Duncan Wyllie 14 October 2006

You are so right, friends are so needed and we must learn to truly appreciate them A wonderful write, well penned Love duncan X

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Nimal Dunuhinga 11 September 2006

Beautifully written Tranquil and true friends are like heavenly flowers in bloom! perhaps different varities but they are really flowers?

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Diane Violet 11 September 2006

Beautiful poem on friends, Tranquil. I have to agree. Excellent write.

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Ruby Root 11 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, Friends indeed are so important to us all. You have all been patient and a great support to me. Take care Excellent warm and honest poem.

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Ruby Root 11 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, Friends indeed are so important to us all. You have all been patient and a great support to me. Take care Excellent warm and honest poem.

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