Thursday, August 10, 2006

(g) 3 (Biographical) The Ocean Paradox Comments

Rating: 3.5

I'm turbulent
My waves surge to reach out
To the roof of my mind
They crash at the shore
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
COMMENTS
Dee Daffodil 12 August 2006

Very beautiful poem....excellent write...I love the Paradox. Hugs, Dee

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Duncan Wyllie 12 August 2006

I love this from start to finish, what amazing feeling, 'I'm vivid blue in daylight And dark as wine in the night' Now there's poetry at a fine moment Love duncan X

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Preeti - is here! 10 August 2006

I like how you have brought out the inner changes in this poem! ....it's lovely! and a change for sure ~ Preets

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 August 2006

DUELING WATERS...I LIKE IT, T.O....THIS IS A SOLID, AUTHOR CUSTOMIZED BEAUTY, MY DEAR! YOU GO WITH IT T. O.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Nalini Hebbar 10 August 2006

TO...real deep ocean...i like the islands...and i like it that the colours are changing too...love...nalini

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David Darbyshire 10 August 2006

Real sweet poem Tran-Q, Love dave xxxxxx

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