Fwb Comments

I like this piece of work. It gets at the heart of the matter. Relationships and boundaries. I have found, If it's too good to be true, it probably is.

Your poem is very honest and truthful about how you feel a relationship should be for you. I like how you depict the whole relationship and what you want from it. You deserve to be loved for yourself alone.

I love this line 'And I smile every time my phone goes off, Hoping it's from you' keep it coming.

Not bad at all... It shows how egocentric people can be. Also, it depicts the heart of man. It's hard to know how another feels in his/her heart for us. Nice read...keep writing dear. However, you may have to read again and make corrections, like this line: And then we you said let's be 'Friends'(sic) . I think the 'we' is meant to be 'when'. Welldone.

Very emotional read, not sure if it's fiction or factual but either way you did a good job bringing emotions to the surface that we all experience at one time or another.

True poem. Rejection sucks. Can I type sucks on here? Been there many times.

a very chronological poem dis. i like. deep from within a heart.

This is a great poem :) expressing many wishes and desires: P thank you for inviting me to read your poems.