Wednesday, December 30, 2009

Future Truths Comments

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No more selfish lies.
no more hurtful words.
no more broken promises
for you to see and hear
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Nicole Gehrman
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I feel real love in that poem. I can tell it really came from the heart. It sounds like my poem 'What's Keeping You And Me'. I think I use the exact same line as you: 'No more selfish lies'. I like it.

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Nicole Gehrman

Nicole Gehrman

Colfax, Wisconsin
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