Sunday, May 8, 2016

Future Seen Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am broken
That I know
Damaged good
Dried up
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Siddartha Montik 06 November 2016

..very very expressive even in dry words I know the times like this..I was there! Thank you Nalini!

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Terry Craddock 09 May 2016

'Barren dunes Quite moonless Nights Colours bleached From tattered hide' wonderful lines, brilliant in descriptive power, loved this and the earlier lines, but I grieve for your pain and will not let you go :) eyes tired but when I can I will look for you, keep writing :)

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