Thursday, November 13, 2008

Future Less Bright Comments

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the world beyond our shameless eyes
is drowning more than we can see
where money is what cheating buys
but never seems to grow on trees
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lauren rogers
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Eddie Larkin 21 November 2008

Wonderful imagery about the world today by one so young... keep on writing, Lauren.

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Ray Harrington-vail 15 November 2008

You have summed up the state of the World in which we live.... Let's hope for a better future. Very moving piece of work.

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so true i love this poem great write

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