Engaged in churning darkness
I spent my days for a grain of light
I could not behold what floated
For I was in prayers closing my eyes
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The cream of darkness is solid for its depth and strong character. it is only through darkness that we emerge into light. A true teacher that teaches us to learn, grow and progress in life. A brilliant poem that teaches us to reflect, dear Poet......10
When Anything is so though To do We leave it as futile But reality is Success lives in technical doing.....
An excellent poem sir! Pragmatic last three lines. Beautifully composed.................10/10
the churning metaphor ghee related is suitably poetically handled..nice to read and ponder on
The froth and bubbles that surface Have no substance nor sustenance Prayers has the power to change things though you missed the transitions but in the end it was worth a penny. Nice thoughts.
Such a fantastic write.......thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.