Wednesday, October 28, 2009

................Futile! ........Trapped! ! .......... Comments

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its all so futile
all so meaningless
if you dont have the compass
that points to your best
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so many futile answers spanned over deaf years Ne plus ultra expression of piquant, unvented, pent-up stirrings always your buddy - - -

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2009

I notice burning pains in these lines...life is a compromise of ideas and ideals; yes... but compromise to what extent? Not to the extent of life itself getting burnt! Utthishtatha! JAgratha! PrApya VarAn NibODhitha! - Vedic Philosophy Wake up! (from doze): be vigilant(on over powering) ! Lean on providers (of help): be enlightened (of miseries) ! Good poem Wardha...deep sad and poignant...very well composed...10*

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 October 2009

That's tyranny of the bondage in our society, Wardha, living together like parasites exploiting and eating each other in a soulless relationship.

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