Thursday, August 22, 2013

Futile Hunt Comments

Rating: 5.0

For something I must have looked,
Searched all these years,
Through all my smiles.
Through my each tear.
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Lucifera Santez
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Marcus Mckinley 05 September 2013

nothing hits harder then a blow to the heart. silent, effertless, absent of touch. the pain unbearable you will survive. well done

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Mohabeer Beeharry 26 August 2013

Very sad but human story. We try to be genuine Only to see that our sincerity has been abused. And we begin to build a new castle. Amd make ourself happy in it.. Lovely very lovely Mohabeer Beeharry

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Khairul Ahsan 23 August 2013

Someday when I am old, It will all be a memory, Bitter yet manageable, Painful yet in a distance. But that day is too far, Pieces of my heart, Are sealed tight in strong rib jar. Very, very touchy!

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