Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Futile Comments

Rating: 3.5

I finally see the futileness of all these I have done
At the very end, I know, I should never have begun
I hope it’s not too late to save this cowardly soul
From the hope it keeps, buried deep, but knows it cannot hold
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Lynnie Kim
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Brian Dorn 28 January 2007

Excellent write, Lynnie... there is nothing at all inferior about your poetry. Good stuff! ! Brian

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