~ Fuss For Un-Gotten Why Then? ~ Comments

Its brilliant and crackling 'Catch catharsis in Un-Gotten pliss! ' ~ Wow what a line Vedantic concept in poetic format well done Ms. Niv Thanks for sharing...10++

This is a crackling shot mind boggling Made easy for fuss for ungotten how to over come Thanks sharing

If we get everything [a kind of Utopia] never attainable Ungotten is indeed spice of life Must learn and accept it with smiling face Poetry of Wisdom not Boredom Thanks for sharing Waiting for many more such nuggets from your gifted mind/pen

This is brilliant! I think I got it but maybe not, its such a great commentary with such playfulness of your words. Beautifully penned.

‘Teno Taktyeno Bhunji Ta’ ~ Gita …I find some resemblance with this message…indeed very difficult exercise to practice…but if fortunate we’re to succeed we’ll find solace contentment and the coveted peace…wonderful write … 10++ dr.sakti

Dear Poet it just like Memo [Psychic] to me to contemplate on ‘to be happy not with Gotten but with Un-Gotten’ Like ‘If it’s up to expectation is good if not best’…no worry no rivalry no drudgery no psychic beggary …excellent easel …thanks… 10++

It is like reverse swing bowling in cricket…we all drool for un-gotten…but it is riches too Melancholy Melody why do we not think in this way…Gotten really stereotyped… find discover rapture in UN GOTTEN… 10+++ PS Savor the UN GOTTEN and get UN GOTTEN in full extent

Packed with Wisdom Calorie to inculcate and contemplate…agree withy Pet Ma’am Indira…unique indeed ball all parameters 10

you have a unique way in giving expression to universal truths that when one reads, it reads as if it's for the first time...

People are never happy with what they get. It's always greener on the other side.....10

Poet's view is very transparent …and it is not what we get…but what we don’t get and enjoy …‘lush lavish/Luxuriant Un-Gotten! ’ Because we’re tired of gotten…lolol…who is tired of Un gotten? Just ‘Nano’ quantity …again lolol…catch catharsis what poet says…by Un gotten 10++ PO PO

A good logical placed here. Well penned Thanks for sharing with me 10++

it's contradictory and it's true we don't get, we want, what we get, we want not. Although i loved the concept, i couldn't agree more with apoet bangla, he is trying to visualize a broader / no bounds approach towards the theme which is essential for the truth to unveil. He is another genius who's calling the poet a genius in who he sees the power, the force to capture the invincible RNT. way to go both of you. best wishes.10++

i agree with some of the others! which we get, want not, which we want get not. but you bring a point which opens up peoples minds to think about it.

To Hon’ble Apoet Bangala Thanks for you scholastic analysis on this poem…and I sincerely honor and welcome it [! ] Let me confess that the literature and cultural soil milieu of Bengal is under direct or subtle influence of Rabindranath Tagore [RNT] …look into history post RNT…literatures &c [2] You’ve commented, 'Jaha chai / bhul kore chai / jaha pai / taha chai na.' (which we get, want not / which we want, get not.) … [3] Actually I didn’t portrayed that in this poetry conversely I’ve satired, ‘Getting is but getting/Clichéd staled stereotyping! ’ [4] Here I didn’t say ‘which we ‘want’ (your get) mistakenly [(bhul) refer to text quoted to the text] want not’ ….rather I’m tired of what I get is ‘Clichéd staled stereotyping! ’ [4] Finally Un gotten is portrayed as ‘…lush lavish/Luxuriant’…love to pamper and pride in that and looking for ‘catharsis’ in Un-gotten …not ‘which we want, get not’ [5] Well every creation [here read poetry] has many flavor facets and flair varies from readers to readers…everyone is right in their analysis …because I believe poetry readers are much awakened [Prabhudha] and with very fine sense of emotion and perception…once again I thank you for you favor to my poetry Regards niv ==== Copy to To Hon’ble Apoet Bangala

I too ask why after reading -this enlighten - your poem 'Fuss For Un-Gotten why then? 'Getting is but getting/cliched stale stereotyping'.why do we pursue the un-gotten or that which has been gotten instead or pursuing one's own creation...that which is one's own image or freshness of things and or ideas.

Nicely written, I believer I understand this one. To be content with what we have and don't worry about the un-gotten. Thanks to Rajaram I get the point. Thanks to you both, Lynn

'What we don’t get Actually that is Wow ~ Gotten the lush lavish Luxuriant Un-Gotten! ' ....This is the poem I appreciate. What we ever get, all are Clichéd! ! Nice to read.Thanks Niv for sharing the poem

I catch the point that one should be content with what he or she has and should not make a fuss for what is un-gotten. Hope I am correct.

rated it 10.... i see the logical approach here.... nice write