Saturday, June 25, 2011

Fusing Comments

Rating: 2.7

You lay now on your silver bed
flowers all around

and that seems right;
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

Great poem. I am impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Best regards Akmal

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Lonnie Hicks

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