Fury Spills Out Comments

Thanks for the note Dylan. I will keep that in mind :) Lauren The Aussie

Hi. I really like this one. As a fellow colleague of yours, I find that poetry does not need as much proper grammar, although in a couple of your poems your grammar does detract from the reading of the poem and makes it harder to read. A quick note: having the same number of syllables in rhyming lines makes for smoother poetry.