Sunday, September 10, 2017

Fury Of The Hurricane Comments

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Hurricanes come and go
but they can hit
with a powerful blow
You don't want to be around
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Dorsey Baker
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Practicing Poetess 11 September 2017

Very true and effective poem, Dorsey, which makes its intended mark. But an edit is in order: Last 2 lines should read, If with a powerful hurricane you are faced. The word when should be replaced with the word with (Prosaic instead of poetic reading: If you are faced with a powerful hurricane.)

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