Sunday, December 28, 2008

(further Away) From The Year Two Thousand And Eight Comments

Rating: 2.6

As we move further away,
From the year two thousand and eight.
As is the custom to celebrate it.
There will be more who will come,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ejaz Khan 16 May 2009

A realistic poem, portraying what's in making. It's interesting to see if the present, shaky struckture would be able to sustain itself or crumble like a cardhouse just before our eyes. Good catch, greetings! Regard

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Roshni D'Souza 03 March 2009

How true! This one needs to be posted on Wall Street. Could you please look at my poem 'the daily news' and tell me what you think.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 January 2009

A poem full of satire for new and old dissemblers.........10/10.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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