Sunday, December 28, 2008

Furry Friends. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two sleepy miniatures
Cuddling up small.
Heads close together,
Making one ball
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Fay Slimm
COMMENTS
Alison Cassidy 09 January 2009

This is delightful Fay. Not only are your subjects to die for (I am a dog fancier, as you may have gathered) but you've written it so well. Lovely traditional feel with impeccable rhythmic structure and some enjambment that works very well to keep the pace bowling along. I really like this. One of your best. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 30 December 2008

It is a comfort to read such a heartwarming poem. Beautiful, Fay. Furry friends understand unconditional love better than some humans do. God bless them all! Love, SandraX

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ngaio beck 29 December 2008

I can feel the cute

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Kris Smith 28 December 2008

What a lovely poem to read first thing on a Sunday morning thankyou Fay 10++++ Chris

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Ann Beard 28 December 2008

Puppies exist to steal affection and they do so effortlessly. I love your poem. thank you. Regards Ann

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